poetry may not be my thing but...
i actually liked this, i usually don't understand poetry, sometimes i do and this time was one of those times i do understand them. great flash nice narration it was helpful for the unpoetical types that don't know how the rhythm goes. i dont know maybe a few animations to go with it would have been nice such as ninjas jumping a round or pirates sailing seas. dunno would have been nice to actually see some sort of animation along with the poem. maybe next time i may say, holy shit this flash ain't gay. ( i didn't think this flash was gay i just wanted to rhyme :P ). 7 out of 10!